Something different .. then a Story or update on how it all goes . Hope you like/enjoy it and don't laugh too loud ( I can hear you ) .
A Man's Poem
What drives a loving Man
looking into his wife's eyes
trying to do all he can
keeping romance true and nice
Inside he's full of love
willing to share it all
doing not always the right thing
well you know that could be tough
also take an unexpected fall
This will happen when trying too hard
to always wanting to please
but running out of idea's
loosing fate in himself
leading to lessen his love
To keep it fresh and honest
the Man must now look back
why he fell in love one past day
he will see what made him special
Look again to his wife's eyes
let her know she's still the one
and i will always be pleased
to keep the romance true and nice
A Man's Poem .. his friend
and most of all .. peace .
Very nice poem, Arnold... touches on one's soul.
ReplyDeleteThanks you Carl . All it takes sometimes , is just a little hint from your Love .. that there is a gap/pause in the Romantic World towards your LaoPo .. to write this very Poem . One must not only write a lovely or
ReplyDeletebeautiful Peom and avoid the not so good feelings . What makes it great is it comes from deep inside your Feelings for a certain Person whatever the feeling is at that moment .